WOTD-ignite #haiku

Desires snuffed out
Depression causes nothing
Deep caring ignites

@Ruth

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connetta says:

January 4, 2019 at 1:46 pm

Take the are out of first line too many syllables.

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RhScribbles says:

January 4, 2019 at 1:47 pm

Ah so correct!! Thank you. I will edit right now. Thanks for reading.

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connetta says:

January 4, 2019 at 2:09 pm

I like your poetry.

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1. RhScribbles says:
  
  January 4, 2019 at 3:26 pm
  
  Thank you Connetta!
  
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  1. connetta says:
    
    January 4, 2019 at 3:30 pm
    
    I can tell you are seriously writing like me.so please tell me if I make a mistake.
    I post the poems straight out of my head.
    
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  2. RhScribbles says:
    
    January 4, 2019 at 3:43 pm
    
    Me too
    
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