Topic: Touch
Word Prompts: “I want touch to be active.”
Style: Clarity Pyramid–two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all).
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CUT
Sever
Lacerate
Family ties slit
Relationships fractured
Fragmented beyond repair
“I came not to send peace, but war.” **
~RuthScribbles
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**Matthew 10:34
Wow! You’ve made this form work really well. Powerful poem!
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Thank you. It’s an unfamiliar Form.
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Yes, that inner war.
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You’ll repair next, right?
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Some are unrepairable. 😦
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😦
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Usually, it’s best to try and fix things, but some relationships can’t be fixed. My ex-husband and I got along much better after we got divorced. We are a good fit as friends/family, we were absolutely a terrible fit as a married couple.
~Cie~
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Thanks for reading
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Whoa! The war word caught me!
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Thanks for reading!
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