Topic: Breathing
Prompt words: surrender empower rest song/music breath/breathe trust wonder
Form: Song, I will not use the suggested form today.
*REMINDER-My poetry is not always how I currently feel. *
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Breath of Life
Forcepts were needed
Face turning blue no breathing
Cord wrapped around neck
Doctors and nurses
Kind of panicked kept working
Suction machine failed
She finally cried
I began breathing again
Life began with breath
~RuthScribbles
The image your poem built is so real. Brilliantly expressed.
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Thank you so much!!
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Strong emotions, well done. Love the last line.
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Thx ! Me too 😻
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Stirring emotions! And that last line…wow!
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Thank you so much for reading!
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My pleasure!
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