My Take – Colleen’s 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 167, #Poet’sChoice

Click HERE to see all the poems. This week is poet’s choice.

I will try another Gogyohka s/l/s/l/l (s=short, l=long)

As I fell asleep last night, the picture of Louisa on our laps taking her last breath intruded in my almost asleep mode, so I talked to her and sent her love and told her I missed her.

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Louisa-
Forever in our hearts
Sweetness
Pure fluffy white
With the angels

~RuthScribbles

I’m not sure this qualifies as a Gogyohka, but I’m ok with that.

14 thoughts on “My Take – Colleen’s 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 167, #Poet’sChoice

  1. I like to think that our pets still love us, and even give us a little nuzzle, even after they’ve crossed the Rainbow Bridge. Louisa must have loved you very much.

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