The #synonymsonly words are life & move. Here is my Etheree.
ETHEREE: The Etheree poem consists of ten lines of 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10 syllables. An Etheree can also be reversed and written 10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1.
from Colleen’s Poetry Challenge Cheat Sheet
Our Journey
existence is constantly evolving
birth to old age-ever progressing
mountains so high, valleys so low
the journey has ups and downs
calmness occurs sometimes
the stories differ
difficult times
happy days
constant
change
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change
constant
happy days
difficult times
the stories differ
calmness occurs sometimes
the journey has ups and downs
mountains so high, valleys so low
birth to old age-ever progressing
existence is constantly evolving
©️RuthScribbles aka RuthEK
Another time/hourglass form. Very nice.
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thank you Trent!
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This worked perfectly as an hourglass and definitely shows “evolving.”
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thank you Susan!
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Well done. I like both ways, Ruth. It’s a great message. The ups and downs of life help us to appreciate the good things in life. ❤
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yes! yes they do!
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Works both ways. Nicely done I like this form.
Pat
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Thank you, Pat!
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You did a good job really taking the prompt and making it your own, nicely done!
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Thank you!!
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Cool form and a great poem.
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Thank you! 🥰
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