Day 4
spring time
time flies
flies away
a way to go
go now
now is right
right place
place to shine
shine bright
bright light
light of hope
hope for peace
peace and love
love humanity
humanity fails
fails to be perfect
perfectly flawed
flawed but beautiful
beautiful spring
spring is here
PS My memory is spastic. I cannot recall what this poem form is called.
©2022 Ruth Klein’s Scribbles
In order to catch up I will not be following prompts.
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This is a loop poem, Ruth. I like it.
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Thank you! I knew you would know! Now maybe the loop will circle my brain and stay available !! lol
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Lol It seems I don’t know as much about forms as Val does!
Since it is a cross between loop and blitz you can name it whatever you like. 😀
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🙃🤣
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Although it does loop, it lacks the rhyme scheme and the 4 line stanzas for that form. I think it is an abbreviated Blitz poem – instead of 2 lines there’s only one… The Blitz is a stream of consciousness kind of poem and this one certainly feels like it possesses that element! It really is good no mater what you call it!
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Yes! Blitz!! And thanks!
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